Feed Back Actions
- Make is clear what page your main cover story is featuring.
- I like the detail here.
- Make sure that your contents page matches the house style and if you are featuring this artist on your front cover, contents and DPS make sure she is not overpowering.
- Make sure your images have captions so the reader knows who and why they are there.
- Add one more story here to fill right to the bottom.
- Make your number stand out a little more make them the same colour as the line under the sub heading.
- Make sure these subheadings stand out a little more take one of the colours from your front cover and use it to underline your sub categories.
In order to improve from what my teacher has told me in my feedback along with my peer feedback i am going to make the sub headings bolder, add a pagenumber to my main cover staory to link it to the artlicle that it belongs too and also im going to add another story to the list of fashion aritcles to fill the space.
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