Peer 1
Strengths - Number of pictures used makes it more intresting to look at. Colour scheme works well, can clearly see the text. Text is a good size & font is easy to read. The 'U' in the background is good because it reinforces the name of the magazine.
Areas for Improvement - It isnt clear what the big/main picture is about, no link to an article/no page number for it. Maybe needs a few more features, as it makes the magazine seem like theres hardly anything in it. The main image is confusing as theres nothing about her, so you dont know why she has cans in her hair.
Peer 2
Strengths - There are some good images that make it interesting. The colour scheme is good and makes the writing stands out. The numbers on images are good.
Areas for Improvement - The main image needs some information about it.
Peer 3
Strengths - Really good picture - Lots of information about the articles, but not too much -
Great contents page, you've followed the conventions and made it look great!
Areas for Improvement - Say something about the main image, we don't really know what it is linked to.
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